The Woman Who Was Never Seen Intro storyboard

Evaluation:
In this first draft of my storyboard the drawings lack a lot of detail and do not show what is going on in the scenes very well at all. I also forgot when drawing up my storyboard to add in the titles before the scenes and also to show where the titles superimposed over the scenes would be in the frame. The examples of shots I wanted to use were in a very random order and were very disjointed creating an effect that if put together that way then they would not create a nice end product that I would be happy with. In my first draft of my storyboard the scenes were not clear to the people looking at it, they were not able to tell what was actually happening by looking at the pictures unless they read the description underneath which was not what I wanted because I was hoping to have the audience of the storyboard being able to mostly tell what was happening in the scene without looking at the description immediately. In my second draft I need to improve the drawings of my scenes, and also put the scenes in a less random order so that the storyboard is not disjointed and ugly, I also need to add titles to the storyboard to show the audience where they will be.