What themes or issues can you see?
In asking this question I aim to show that the audience
of my storyboard understand the theme of my intro.
Direct Reference:
‘An issue I see is anxiety as the woman is unable to
leave her house and she could possibly have OCD and/or an issue with sitting
still as she changes her socks a lot and other things.’
‘The issues I see is a sense of nervousness and anxiety
for the woman when trying to go outside. It suggests to me that she has a deep
fear of the world which may prevent her from her life.’
Discrete Analysis:
Both interviewees caught on to the theme of mental
health and the OCD of the woman in her home.
However, the interviewees explained their points
differently for example the ways in which the OCD was shown.
The first interviewee said that OCD is shown through
the change of socks and not being able to sit still. Whereas, interviewee two
talked of how her deep issues made her fear the world and caused problems in
her daily life.
Conclusions:
Both interviewees were able to identify the running
theme of OCD and anxiety caused by feeling trapped in her own home. They also
both said that the woman had a nervous nature and it affected her life.
Action Statement:
OCD was clearly recognised in the storyboard by the two
interviewees, I used mental health as an issue because there are a lot of
different mental health sectors and Agoraphobia is not a very well - known one.
The storyboard links to the audience understanding because what I tried to
convey through my storyboard was clear to the interviewees and they understood
the issues I was trying to put across.
Is the Storyline interesting to you?
The aim of this question is to find out how successful
my intro would be with my target audience.
Direct Reference:
‘I find the storyboard interesting as the person is
unique and different, and it looks as if her daily activities are not the usual
boring tasks you usually see’.
‘Yes, from an audience perspective we typically do not
fear the outside so seeing the protagonist face this fear is captivating for
me’.
‘The storyline seems interesting because I would like
some explanation of the protagonists odd behaviours’.
Discrete Analysis:
All participants in my qualitative survey talked of
their interest in the storyline of my intro and how they liked the idea because
of the odd characteristics and the unusual behaviour.
The interest shown by the participants is seen because
what catches their eye is the unique actions, behaviour and idiosyncrasies, and
how being stuck in her home makes her actions different to the tasks of people
living a normal life.
Conclusions:
In conclusion all participants saw interest for my
intro and this meant that I knew my intro would appeal to my target audience.
Action Statement:
I asked this question to my participants because I
needed to know how far my intro storyline fit into my target audience age
group. Because they all said this storyline interested them this made it easier
for me because I knew that when making the intro I could relax a little knowing
it would appeal to a larger group of people.
Can you see any Social Realism conventions, if so what
are they?
I aim to find out if my audience thinks that my film
intro fits into the genre and is a realistic issue that interests them.
Direct Reference:
‘Some conventions of Social Realism can be identified
in this storyboard, for example the woman appears to live in a small house
suggesting she is working class and the subject matter of mental illness which
is not a very talked about issue’.
‘I can see some Social Realism conventions such as the
use of location, as it is set in her home, it emphasises on the presented
issues and the face of the protagonist is not shown in the first four shots;
making the audience intrigued in who she is’.
Discrete Analysis:
All participants in my survey agreed that the location
of my intro was conventional and that it emphasises the issues she faces and
the class she is categorised into.
The differences between responses were how the shots
made up the personality of the character. In one response the participant talks
of how the home brings out a part of her personality and tells the audience a
bit about the character. Whereas the other participant talks about the mystery
in not seeing the characters face and how this
gives the audience a need to carry on watching and figure out her full
personality, as by not seeing her face the only connotations we find out are
that she is shy and scared.
Conclusions:
In conclusion all participants found at least one
convention in my intro and were able to explain why it was conventional to the
genre.
Action Statement:
The house was clearly recognised as being conventional
of the Social Realism genre through its real location and size creating an
image of the working class for the audience. My aim for this question was to
find out if my intro was conventional enough to fit into the Social Realism
genre and be clear to the audience what was going on in the intro that links to
other films of the same genre.
What technical elements are included?
I aim to figure out from the responses what I have used
and what I need to include when filming.
Direct Reference:
‘There are different
angles and there is a use of shallow focus and other technical codes such as
POV shots, an establishing shot and match on action so there is a good use of
technical codes’.
‘Different camera angles
have been employed to create meaning, as well as the use of mise en scene to
emphasise the representation of the main character’.
‘Technical elements such
as non – diegetic music, different camera shots e.g. POV shots, jump cuts for
editing and interesting mise en scene can all be seen in the storyboard’.
Discrete Analysis:
The participants of my
survey were all aware of the shot variety shown in my storyboard and how it
brought interest to the audience and how the use of non – diegetic sound was a
good use of technical elements.
Some interviewees
explained their reasoning of which technical codes are used in the intro and others
only explained which areas of technical codes were included but not the
specifics of it.
Conclusions:
All of my peers in my
survey could see a range of technical elements in my storyboard, mostly in
camerawork but also in other areas as well. The participants explained in their
different answers that they could see all 4 areas that make up a film, which
means I have used a wide range of ideas to create an idea for a project I am
excited about.
Action Statement:
It was clear to the
interviewees that I wanted to use a range of technical elements and that I
wanted to make it as good as possible with the range of things I could use. My
aim with the technical elements was to make a product that I could be proud of
using what I have been taught throughout the media course, by using a variety
of shots in my intro it makes the filming look better, and cutting the match on
action in the right place is important because it gives it a more professional
look.
Could I have included more issues alongside this one?
I wanted to find out from
my audience what other issues could possibly be used to tie in with my
storyline and create a better product.
Direct reference:
‘You could have included
some darker issues that perhaps more people would be able to relate to/
understand. Perhaps there could have been another character involved to display
the protagonist’s ability/ disability to form close relationships’.
‘No, I feel as though if
you included more issues, it may take away the focus on the main meaning you’re
creating’.
‘You could have included
issues such as relationship issues/ family issues between the character and
people in her life’.
Discrete analysis:
Most of my interviewees
noted that I could add in more issues to my intro to link in to my issue of
mental illness and the reasons for it as well as how it can affect a person,
perhaps I could have included depression through her being trapped in her own
home. Or I could have included family issues as a factor in her Agoraphobia.
There was a disagreement
in one response because the participant said that by adding more issues to the
intro then it would take away from the main issue of Agoraphobia and that is
not something that I want to happen.
Conclusions:
I could have possibly
added more issues and made more backstory through those issues, but it may take
away from the original storyline and issue of Agoraphobia which is not a very
common topic discussed through film and not many people understand what it is
or why it is a mental illness.
Action Statement:
Through this question I
wanted to find out how the audience thought my film fit into different
categories of issues and how I could improve these by adding more issues or
whether they thought that it didn’t need any more help to make it better. By
asking these questions I was able to gather the opinions of my peers and what
issues they thought audiences might enjoy seeing more.
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