Evaluation:
This is the second draft of my evaluation and it is a lot better than the first draft. I have moved the shots around so the scenes flow together a little more effortlessly. In front of all the scenes I have added the vanity titles before any of the action starts. I have added more detail into my storyboard and drawn a wavy line where the titles that will be superimposed are going to be in the scene. I am still unhappy with the amount of squares I have taken up because I feel that there is not enough happening in this intro and it needs more connecting parts. Through the storyboard it is clearer that there is match on action where the protagonist is trying to leave but cannot push herself to do it. Overall this was a more successful storyboard but I feel there are still a lot of things I can add in to it.
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