Evaluation:
This is my final draft of my storyboard and I feel happy with the way it turned out. In my last draft I talked about how I felt that I had not taken up enough squares with my scenes and that there was not enough action, so I added in some scenes with Olivia in them and her daily activities to join her life together. I am happy with the layout of the scenes as it makes a lot more sense to have them in this order than having them in a random, disjointed pattern that didn't make any sense at all. I decided to add more than one shot of Olivia putting on socks to show her hints of OCD and the picky habits she has. Also the end scene is going to be a fade to black to allow it to fade in to the title screen. The storyboard is a lot clearer than my first draft by a long way and the drawings are clear to the audience now which is what I wanted so I'm happy that I made the drawings better throughout the process.
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